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Sunday, July 20, 2008

Hi! I'm trying to find time to finish this animation at the moment, but in the meantime I thought I'd put it up for comment. I'm having a problem with video playback on my computer at the moment so getting the timing is quite difficult. But I'm happy with the keys and just need to finess the overshoots and add the lip synching.

As always, let me know what you think!

1 comment:

David Beer said...

Hey dude. I see where you are going with this. my comments so far would be that at 5sec his left wrist seems a bit too bent. I fell there may be a few places where the wrist changes are a bit too un-true to form. Um, other thing I would say... (wow this is a first!!!!) from a compositional point of view , the staging of the character lying on the florr leads the views eye out of the picture. perhaps if the arm created a 'breaker' in the corner of the page/screen i dont have sound at the mo, so I'm assuming it's not pivotal to the context. later dude, well done for animating, i know it take time and effort with these jobs of ours.