tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-33224338.post3261715486743969818..comments2023-10-10T12:01:40.779+00:00Comments on A series of rather unfortunate events: Paulhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14144753639270148185noreply@blogger.comBlogger1125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-33224338.post-19399313305839706852008-08-11T17:14:00.000+00:002008-08-11T17:14:00.000+00:00Hey dude. I see where you are going with this. my ...Hey dude. I see where you are going with this. my comments so far would be that at 5sec his left wrist seems a bit too bent. I fell there may be a few places where the wrist changes are a bit too un-true to form. Um, other thing I would say... (wow this is a first!!!!) from a compositional point of view , the staging of the character lying on the florr leads the views eye out of the picture. perhaps if the arm created a 'breaker' in the corner of the page/screen i dont have sound at the mo, so I'm assuming it's not pivotal to the context. later dude, well done for animating, i know it take time and effort with these jobs of ours.David Beerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01092532617777704279noreply@blogger.com